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Open Poetry #26

Fallin

That Voice
Junior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 34

0 posted 2003-05-26 01:39 PM

Splash!
I’m fallin’ into your eyes
That have been watchin’ me in surprise
At the silliness and foolishness I do
To get the attention of you,
blink
Am I too startlin’ for your way
A little provocative in my play
It all just harmless fun
Ended as quickly as begun

Let me fall in to the pool of your eyes
And swim the tidal emotion that will rise
My soul will skinny dip
On the way by let me taste your lip
Sweet taste as I continue to fall
Kersplash Cannonball!!!

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-05-26 02:17 PM

nice write

QjQ

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

2 posted 2003-05-26 03:00 PM

Too late to put on the swimming goggles, eh? *L

What is normally considered seasonal frolicking can be done in the dead of the coldest of winters.

I enjoyed the read.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-05-26 03:10 PM

I see we have another jester here...

cute write

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-05-26 04:30 PM

Yes, a cute write..thanx for sharing it
with us.

Joe Houck
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 324
california

5 posted 2003-05-26 05:28 PM

very nice....liked this a lot
Joe

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-05-27 03:39 AM

cool!

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