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Restless Wonder |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Throwing up my arms moving in beside myself measuring my happiness through faraway looks in your eyes. Where time is of the essence that lies so far and few between fitting in the corners around the boarders of my mind. Turned halfway in the middle coming together and apart just when I think I'm over you tearing pieces of my heart. If time could just stand still I might find a better way without losing my direction when the weeks run into days. Sorting out my feelings stacked on top of one another rearranging my content that stirs my restless wonder. I no longer look for pieces that make my missing incomplete shaping things, imperfectly once the figures factor in. Then it comes to me so clearly slipping in beside myself in that moment interlocking forever,and unfinished~ ~*~ *revised*no date, no time~ |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
You just get better n' better Bluesy. Like this one much. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You sure do! This had its twists and turns and kept me right to the very last word. I felt the gut wrenching of this one big time, and that is great writing. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write! every verse is perfect! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
BluesSerenade, I’m really glad, that in the end, it came to you so clearly... It must be hard to find your way sometimes, in a heart as big as yours... Your poetry, really is amazing! Thanks as always, for gracing us with your heartfelt splendor... Richy |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You have written a very normal part of all our lives well. Peace to you and in your heart...Thanx Bluesy.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSerenade~ I so enjoy reading you~ 'If time could just stand still' I've certainly known that moment-of-thought~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
If time could just stand still I might find a better way without losing my direction when the weeks run into days. my favorite part...I sit here sometimes wondering how time has slipped away and yet it seems like only yesterday that... ~smiling to your words~ M |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Love touches the timeless part of the soul...and so did you. Beautiful work, thank you for sharing it. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This definitely was a bluer shade of blue. "Turned halfway in the middle coming together and apart..." Yep! I have known that feeling but could never have said it sooo well! Healing hugs, Linda |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks to all of you for reading me. Sometimes I think I am so far out there, but hey, it's not such a bad place to be. Reality checks are a fact of life, even if I am missing something. Hugs all around~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Faster.....sooner.....NOW!!! That's the way it has to be, while all the same I wish we could get some nice Kodak moments for once! (big hugggsssssss) If only there can be progress and all the same be caesuras within progress, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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