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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-05-25 01:12 PM



In my quest for a spiritual Everest,
I find the slopes are often steep
and the climb sometimes makes me weep
and flail helplessly,
but never hopelessly.

For as long as I keep my eyes
on the highest peak
I shall not fall weak
and defeated to
the bottom of the mountain.

My personal quest
to seek the spirit of Everest
will not let me rest
upon the dangerous cliffs of despair,
but rather forces me to look higher
to seek the purest air.


© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-05-25 01:22 PM


Kacy,  this is awesome....and gives us all
hope and conviction..to win and not fail.

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2 posted 2003-05-25 01:25 PM


thank you for that reply, dear Magnus
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3 posted 2003-05-25 01:40 PM


"...and Alexander, having conquered all the world, wept for there were no more worlds to conquer."

The journey is the prize especially when the eyes seek mountaintops the human soul can never reach.

Safe passage, keep climbing.  Thanks for waving as you pass.

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4 posted 2003-05-25 01:46 PM


and to me? This is what it's all about. And each climb feels like "Everest". The climb makes you appreciate the valleys too, though. (gotta admire the designer then, huh?)  *winksandhugs* you!
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5 posted 2003-05-25 03:28 PM


icebox, as I pass? LOL, I'm desperately climbing these days with my fingertips dug in as deep as they'll go, wondering how long I can keep this upward momentum!


sister serenity, yes, I actually enjoy the valley as well, as it makes the climb more meaningful

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6 posted 2003-05-25 03:38 PM


Midnite...I do believe your spirit quest...I see it all the time in your words that show the strength of you internally.  Climb on!
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7 posted 2003-05-25 03:41 PM


Midnite ... I THINK I am understanding ... is the "peak" a diety ?

... There is no normal life Wyatt, just life ... so live!

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8 posted 2003-05-25 04:04 PM


A poem filled with hope. Your words give us all strength to climb our Everest. Magnificent...I love how you express hope in this wonderful poem....**hug**

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9 posted 2003-05-25 04:07 PM


thanking you Martie, for always helping me climb

hello, stranger! I seek peace and calmness, tranquility. I guess that could also mean questing the grace of a deity?

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10 posted 2003-05-26 03:15 AM


nice
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11 posted 2003-05-26 10:20 AM


Startime, I missed your reply yesterday, but THANKING YOU today for climbing with me on this one.

and thanks to you for being here too, Dixie


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12 posted 2003-05-26 09:53 PM




(sigh) And that is just what Elijah the prophet felt when trying to hear what God had to say, he climed the mountain and the whole time didn't know why but he followed His word and in the end, he was glad he did and found his awakening! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, baby steps is all it takes to master the pinnacle, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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13 posted 2003-05-26 10:07 PM


hey Noah, howz about climbing up Mt Evans? it's not so far away, and definitely closer to the ground
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