Open Poetry #26 |
The Melancholy Blues |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
The Melancholy Blues Boredom writes plain Depression pens dark I had shed another tear Upon a questionmark All became complex Parts interconnected Supposing the worse As feelings collected Silence with thoughts Until strength is gained Where page after page Became tear stained In the too hard basket It became obvious why Being clouded in doubt Upon each page I cry In my poetic demise Confidence was weak When doubting myself This is nothing unique Words had departed Taking away my muse Anxieity began to sing The melancholy blues HopeĀ©2003 |
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life Junior Member
since 2003-04-14
Posts 36India |
hey there, the depth n the sadness is felt in each word u have penned down... keep writing luvs life friendship is unnecessary...like philosophy...like art |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you life ..... when feeling down on myself , I do find poetry to be good therapy Thanks for your kind reply Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the words are in your heart somewhere, they never go away for good...they're just on a temporary leave of absence...don't stress...it will all come again |
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That Voice Junior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 34 |
hey I like this shouldn't be last on the list where I found it so BUMP! up to the top it goes.. |
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