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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-04-18 02:19 AM



The Melancholy Blues

Boredom writes plain
Depression pens dark
I had shed another tear
Upon a questionmark

All became complex
Parts interconnected
Supposing the worse
As feelings collected

Silence with thoughts
Until strength is gained
Where page after page
Became tear stained

In the too hard basket
It became obvious why
Being clouded in doubt
Upon each page I cry

In my  poetic demise
Confidence was weak
When doubting myself
This is nothing unique

Words had departed
Taking away my muse
Anxieity began to sing
The melancholy blues


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life
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since 2003-04-14
Posts 36
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1 posted 2003-04-18 02:30 AM



hey there,
the depth n the sadness is felt in each word u have penned down...
keep writing
luvs
life

friendship is unnecessary...like philosophy...like art
it has no survival value...rather it is one of those things that gives value to survival...

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
2 posted 2003-04-18 02:35 AM


Thank you life ..... when feeling down on myself , I do find poetry to be good therapy
Thanks for your kind reply
Hope

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-04-18 02:39 AM


the words are in your heart somewhere, they never go away for good...they're just on a temporary leave of absence...don't stress...it will all come again
That Voice
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 34

4 posted 2003-05-18 10:43 PM


hey
I like this
shouldn't be last on the list
where I found it
so
BUMP!
up to the top it goes..

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