Open Poetry #26 |
Propensity for Intensity |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I have a propensity for too much intensity. I get my fix each day reading Pipsters at play, teasing trembling keyboards, pouring pure soul stuff all over my waiting screen, sometimes making me scream as if trapped in a bad dream, wounding both eyes and mind. But I read it anyway and reply whenever I can. Sometimes though, there is no suitable reply, and all I can offer is a long silent sigh of understanding, or at the very least, a nod in quiet compassion as I carefully tiptoe past you and make my exit out the back door. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (05-25-2003 10:55 AM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Get back in here Kacy, don't ya know an alarm sounds when ya open the back door! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ROTF...you only THINK you can leave... heed Dunc... and come back and play with us! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFL! ok, here I am. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
sneaking out the back door huh!! see how you are QjQ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Q, I always get caught! LOL, thanks for replying. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I never did learn how to tip toe lightly, seems I come crashing in like gangbusters and don't know when to take my leave. This was such a nice poem Kacy, I liked these couple lines especially~ sometimes making me scream as if trapped in a bad dream, I am always left feeling better just by being here though. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Better be careful! Reading poetry can lead to all sort of aberrant behavior such as listening to music or even dancing. You could become exposed to thoughts which provoke emotions perhaps even sensual feelings. Certainly you can see the danger in this activity! Beware! *smile* Nice write, thanks for sharing it. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very nice! Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have been "guilty" of that myself at times. Then there are the poems that I do not reply to because I have not a clue of understanding what I had just read! It is beyond my level of comprehension! Have a great day! Linda |
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