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Black Swan
Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-04-18 01:07 AM


Yes I can
It does exsist
I believe in your sins
But now you can be forgiven

Just change
Fight for me
Live your life
Until I come back for you

The gate hath closed
Frutiful times dry up
Sleek petals shrivel
And time finds that it doesn't have to try
We were meant to find,
each other
I loved you like I am not
destined to love another

Have to deal
Meditating the idea
Letting it boil down
Presenting it on silver platter
Proving everyone, of its form

It does happen
Open your third eye
I will prove this is real
By stickin around

© Copyright 2003 Talia - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-04-19 03:58 AM


Talia:

I loved this:

It does happen
Open your third eye
I will prove this is real

amazing lines   xxoo

Ericc
Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-04-19 12:59 PM


Wonderful.
And what a great reply from Little Wing!
Eric

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-05-25 04:52 AM



Deep_Inside
Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding
4 posted 2003-05-28 12:34 PM


i like it what more can i say
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