Open Poetry #26 |
Alphabet Poem |
Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
Analyzing the Beautiful while Criticizing the Dubious Excercising my right of Freedom Generously giving while Having an Indifferent opinion,just trying to Justify my actions and I Know that I have to succeed Leaning over the edge of insanity... My mind has wings! Nothing to loose Opening doors of opportunity always Proceeding with caution Quoting all the best Remembering all the rest Swash-buckling my fears, for only mere seconds Tasting victory Understanding how Versatile I am Wondering when it all might end,how X-asperaitng life can be Younger I will no longer grow but I am Zealously looking forward to the rest of my life, and the best of me |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
VERY creative! I like it! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Always admired those that wrote these things. The second one starts with "B" and ends with "A" right? Then, the third with "C"? Good write. ~wranx |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very creative and much enjoyed! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Talia, You know this concept had all the potential of being cheesy. But you did it with total class. I am impressed. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I totally echo everyone here I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Talia - awesome job - you should make this a challenge . . . xxoo |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
and now I know my alphabet..amazing job here!!! loved it If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
unique |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write! yes! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
An alphabetical flow of beautiful thoughts. Love, Margherita |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A great format - and very upbeat verse as well... |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
now this was intresting and good too |
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