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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
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on the moon

0 posted 2003-04-15 09:27 PM


Analyzing the
Beautiful while
Criticizing the
Dubious
Excercising my right of
Freedom
Generously giving while
Having an
Indifferent opinion,just trying to
Justify my actions and I
Know that I have to succeed
Leaning over the edge of insanity...
My mind has wings!
Nothing to loose
Opening doors of opportunity always
Proceeding with caution
Quoting all the best
Remembering all the rest
Swash-buckling my fears, for only mere seconds
Tasting victory
Understanding how
Versatile I am
Wondering when it all might end,how
X-asperaitng life can be
Younger I will no longer grow but I am
Zealously looking forward to the rest of my life,
                              and the best of me

© Copyright 2003 Talia - All Rights Reserved
Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

1 posted 2003-04-15 09:40 PM


VERY creative!  I like it!
wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
2 posted 2003-04-15 10:04 PM


Always admired those that wrote these things. The second one starts with "B" and ends with "A" right? Then, the third with "C"?

Good write.

~wranx

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-04-15 10:13 PM


Very creative and much enjoyed!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Larry C
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4 posted 2003-04-15 11:42 PM


Talia,
You know this concept had all the potential of being cheesy. But you did it with total class. I am impressed.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow
5 posted 2003-04-16 12:11 PM


I totally echo everyone here

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
6 posted 2003-04-16 12:27 PM


Talia - awesome job - you should make this a challenge . . .
xxoo

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA
7 posted 2003-05-23 01:58 PM


and now I know my alphabet..amazing job here!!! loved it

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Brad Majors
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Georgia
8 posted 2003-05-23 02:31 PM


unique
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
9 posted 2003-05-23 06:39 PM


awesome write! yes!
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
10 posted 2003-05-23 06:51 PM


An alphabetical flow of beautiful thoughts.
Love, Margherita

Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
11 posted 2003-05-23 08:09 PM


A great format - and very upbeat verse as well...
Deep_Inside
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i can't stop hiding
12 posted 2003-05-28 12:42 PM


now this was intresting and good too
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