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Open Poetry #26

Here Come Waves

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-04-17 09:55 PM

The frightening reality
that in just like you
sent you running
not knowing what to do

I can feel you cry
I can hurt your pain
I can taste your blood
from your wounds of shame

I will watch you still
sitting alone
learning how to breathe agian
is so very hard on my own

My eyes have dried
but only for now
never will I see you again
as another face in the crowd

I can feel you cry
I can hurt your pain
I can cry your tears
from your eyes
come waves

I will watch your window
from a near by tree
hoping I might fall out
and you could catch me

I've fallen from love
and I've fallen from grace
please join me in my tourment
cause I'll feel better once i see your face

jaysh
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 133
IL, USA

1 posted 2003-04-17 10:15 PM

Great poem, I read another one of your poems also, you express yourself well, keep up the good work, and keep writing great poetry

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

2 posted 2003-04-17 10:29 PM

Thanks jaysh! I appreciate you readin my work

<3Talia<3

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-05-25 04:53 AM

....wow

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

4 posted 2003-05-28 12:31 PM

ok do you remember the simpsons episode when homer gets his canabis card, and flanders reads him the bible.
(ya remember member) what did homer say at the end. WOW......WOW this poem was realy good

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