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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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I’ve struggled always to reach the summit in search of the light Oh, Glory Time and again my progress was halted by false trail and slippery foothold Leaving me to start anew the quest for revelation and fall short of sanctity Oh, Hosanna But, I now realize that my path was amiss from the very first step and I’ve tired from the labor So, I sit waiting here in the lowlands hoping to finally be found By Grace |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Hope she finds you quickly, great write much better than the 80s tune of the same name..grin |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
some days it just doesn't pay to travel |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Grace--something I've been thinking about much lately. Not achieved by works, and yes, it is so. Hugs you. Sometimes the hardest lesson in life is that we are doing exactly what we should... Hugs to you. All IS well.  |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
But, I now realize that my path was amiss from the very first step and I’ve tired from the labor understand that, another humbling write. Jason |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A man is found when he is ready.... I have a feeling you've already been found by your Grace....and know it well. Nice job, Ed Ed ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Don't dismiss being in the valley as a bad thing. We all need valleys in our life to show us how wonderful it is when we reach the summit. If it is a 'she' you're waiting for - she will come. If it is emotional grace you are waiting for - you already have it - in spades. I have yet to meet a more grace-full Wranx!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
your heart, your valley of humanity, holds much grace already, so, dearest Ed, you needn't keep looking any other place for ultimate grace |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Great work Ed.... Miss you....I'm waiting... Amore H |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
i was hoping it would be a link to the doors song, but the poem was wonderful consolation - nice. -majnu |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Braided irony, very nice. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have the overwhelming urge to give you a big hug and tell you that Grace has been with you all along... Love, Light & Grace, EA |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful piece, I enjoyed it very much Julie |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
May you hold those keys in your hand xxoo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed "I’ve struggled always to reach the summit in search of the light" Grace is the struggle! |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
don't mind if I take a quick peek and rush back out do you?  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ed, she will find you....:  Hugs, Ethel |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
In our personal struggles we learn perspective, and if we are lucky we become graceful and accept the reasons why. Often, we find we held the winning card the whole time. Nice write, ace~ |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
is that what you are doing down by the river? what if that savior is water? :O |
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