Open Poetry #26 |
The Many Shaded Blue |
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
It seems my words are always so few when I express this love with a letter in the words of a many shaded blue. How often my thoughts of us, of you, become the melody of a heart found singing this love into the many shaded blue. So many words to choose, none so new, that say how very much I would like to wrap you in the many shades of blue. My thoughts so often drifting as they do to every moment in my soul when you were the song written with shades of blue. So many sides displayed, so many that imbue the total harp of lingering notes that swirl; then rise blended into the many shaded blue. [This message has been edited by Ivy Rose (05-25-2003 02:13 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, the taste, the feel...the sight of many shades.. Nicely said Ivy.. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*sigh* lovely..enjoyed If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Wow I love the form of this, sweet friend, all the rhyes almost seem to "imbue" into each other like the blues and pinks in cotton candy! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, I can't even begin to count all those shades you've painted here, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Sweet love in shades of blue you sing well in this wonderful poem. A total joy to read. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ivy Rose - what a beautiful song this would make. "Many shades of blue", I like it, like it a lot. Of whom do you write, if I may be so bold to ask... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ivy, this is beautiful. It really does sound like a love song. Hugs, Ethel |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the color, and how you shaded them to suit you. Softly soothing, you~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful write |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The many shades are just so perfectly Passionately, aren't they?... Nice write, Ivy... Thanks for the birthday wishes... How far from the Cape are you?.. |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
This is a gorgeous poem, and I love how you take the color blue, so often used to demote sadness, and use it in such a unique fashion here in this love poem. I love blue, and I much prefer your interpretation of its emotional meaning Mike |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Beautifully written--very descriptive. Rich verbiage. A lovely poem. Warm hugs, Linda |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IvyRose~ I adore the shades of your penning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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