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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-05-24 11:41 AM

Sonnet Blue

I watch each movement, eyes upon his face
When resting mine in arms that hold me strong.
In fears forgot, my trust in his embrace
Brings tears, a sense of righting all that's wrong.

If only silent thoughts could wend their way
To pull us closer, bodies speaking true
The love for him I keep, but can't allay
Would mirror eyes in love with his of blue.

A puzzlement of mind, this heart in choice
Confesses daily of his missing touch.
To color over shadow's inner voice
I dream those dreams, infectious needs of such.

So worry not, the day will come to be
When body speaks, my soul entwined with Thee.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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1 posted 2003-05-24 02:48 PM

awesome write M, love the theme and rhyming!

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-05-24 02:55 PM

*** So worry not, the day will come to be
When body speaks, my soul entwined with Thee.

with a cloesing like this what else can i say but a terrific write,,

QjQ

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-05-24 02:57 PM

Thank you Dixie

and Q, I was trying the workshop theme of the month. I haven't written a sonnet in a while.

Thank you both.

M

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-05-24 03:01 PM

WynterGal~
BEAUTIFULLY done !

I'm playing hookey !
Can't da-dum so good these days.
Well, my da-dum's okay .... but the STRESS got to me !
(I TOLD 'em I was sick !)
LOL .. all things in good time~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-05-24 03:06 PM

You funny girl, Margie

I was talking to someone on here about our Florida visit. I will have a chance to meet Blues Serenade a week from Tuesday. I am so excited...now if only we have some beautiful weather.
As you can tell I am playing "cleaning" hooky.
And just reading and rolling for a bit.

hugs
M

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2003-05-24 04:57 PM

M. excellent....you obviously worked very
hard to produce a gem of a sonnet... thanx
for sharing it.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2003-05-24 05:07 PM

Thanks Barry for stopping by. I wish I could say I have to work hard at these...only the meter keeps me thinking, the rest just comes, as long as I am in a poetic mood.

M

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