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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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He asked of me to just do this: "Kiss your hands," and I asked, "why?" "Kiss your hands" he asked again, so sheepishly, I complied, and told him that I did. "Do that for me every day." Again I asked him why. "Just do that for me, will you, please? Until the day I can." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey, do it for me too til I can. Are hands the limit or is there some room for expansion in there?? Excellent idea and you say a lot with so little words! No easy task at the best of times. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Just do that for me, will you, please? Until the day I can." ============================ *smiling, smiling, smiling* you do know how precious this is, dont you? yes...you know...   I refuse to accept that mankind is so tragically bound to the starless midnight of racism & war that the daybreak of peace can never be reality. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
He sounds like the kind of man whose hands I would like to kiss! He sounds so sweet & sensitive!  Mornin' hugs, EA |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity blaze - until the day, h'mmmmm... BC |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yep... poetess in motion... and bless his originality.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Loving this Serenity. You do wear your tiara well. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
danke' once again... and? Since the sun is up I guess that is my cue...off to the crypt I creep.  and ya'll KNOW I will dream sweet.  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Very well done. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I needed a smile this morning Karen - thankyou for your bewitching abilities. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Did I interpret this correctly. While reading this, I thought of a husband/wife or 2 lovers separted by a thick glass window, as if the man was in prison and making the request. Enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Interesting interpretation, Opeth... there are many forms of prisons... and sometimes the glass walls can be quite opaque... this may form into a very interesting thread when our Serenity arises...  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
revelatory, isnt it? |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful, absolutely! Maree  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks.(sneak attack  ) |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Ahhh yes, kiss your lovely hands And gently, hold the spirit of my love Till I can replace it, with the moistness of my lips, upon yours It’s nice how creative love can make you! This was so nice Serenity! I was once told to kiss something else... I said, “OK, now what?” And she said, “Nothing, that’s all.” ??? lol Richy |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Smiling BIG for you, lady. Gotta love it.  "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh, that's fine....that's just so fine.... A beautiful thought, and beautifully expressed. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, yet again, you know that I know!! Heart hugs, Ethel |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A blushing thank you. Funny? For all the fancy stuff and word hoops I TRY to jump through, it's so often the simplest things that touch people's hearts--I'm happy to share some of the "good moments" with you all. Hugs to Forum! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity...gotta agree with all the others, and you...this is simple and so sweetly loving. I hope you didn't make it up and someone really did say this to you...if not, they should! Hugs! |
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