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She Lost Her Heart
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She Lost Her Heart |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
She aimlessly walks around searching for her heart A heart he shattered in a million pieces She's found a lot, but not yet her heart She's found the faded memories of happiness but they don't mean much to her anymore She's found the dreams she had of making it big but she doesn't want to be bothered with them right now She's found her family's love but she doesn't recognize it She finds him and that's the first thing she goes for Nevermind the pain, the hurt or the abuse She still finds him Not the dreams, memories or true love Instead she finds him How sad it is to see her go She couldn't even see the hands reaching out to help her...save her She couldn't feel their love All she felt was his power Unless she stops to turn around She's never going to find her heart again |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write! very beautifully sad |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
Thank you for your reply. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
A sad piece full of emotion, I hope one day she finds her heart again.  Julie |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely wrote and heart felt!! QjQ |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful poem, even though it's so sad!! Hugs, Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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