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My Muse Has Gone On Walkabout
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My Muse Has Gone On Walkabout |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Picture by Alan Ayers * * * My mind remains wide open In case my muse returns to me I seem to have lost my focus Through the lens I just can't see My muse has gone on walkabout The words no longer seem to flow So I must plant another seed And hope to see it bloom and grow I sit here and I ponder Life without my poetry But that's something I can't imagine For it's such a big part of me So I'll escape inside my dreams Where life goes on without a care Who knows what I mind find Maybe my muse is hiding there? * * * * "Walk on a rainbow trail, walk on a trail of song, and all about you will be beauty. There is a way out of every dark mist, over the rainbow trail" I am in motion |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Keep that mind wide open Sue and take those nice long naps And If you’ve lost your focus make sure you’ve removed the caps I also thought that planting seeds would be my safest bet Too bad that in the morning I looked like a Chia Pet? So don’t you worry, go to bed and dream of Kangaroo’s? I know that your poems mean a lot They mean lots to us too! Pleasant Dreams Sue, Richy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Looks like you went out WITH your muse, Sue... This is lovely...  |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
If you can't find it in your dreams, look among the flowers or a rainbow... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suetang That's what I did, LOL enjoyed. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
So I'll escape inside my dreams Where life goes on without a care Who knows what I mind find Maybe my muse is hiding there? Well Sue, it looks like you've found your muse from the way you've written this beautiful poem. I love your poetry. It's always wonderful. Hugs,  Ethel |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sue, don't panic, it is there having a little breather, a line will come into your head very shortly, it more than likely will be when the computer has just been turned off, you have turned off all the lights, about to get into bed. Even though you will say the line over and over in your head, don't rely on memory, go back out, write the line down, and there will be your next great poem. I hope that it comes to you soon my friend, the more you worry about finding your muse, the harder you might have to try to find it, relax and enjoy the world and your friends. Goodluck, take care. Sincerely Rick |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Sue, I know there will be times, dear friend when our muse escapes us all. But open your eyes to lifes beauty and soon you'll be in awe. For life it holds so many things that are pleasing to the eye and through our vision we create leaving us breathless...~sigh. Your muse is close at hand of that you can depend for in you I find inspiration... through the muse of a friend. quatro |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
I'd say it's back and knocking on your door! beautifully done |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Sue ~~ I've got popped in for a quick read of your poem. Hang on and think good thoughts; I'm sure your muse is just taking a much needed holiday! As always, this was a great read. Huggles, Marti |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Sue, many of my poems come from my dreams, which I cherish so much and believe truly are a miracle of life! (kiss on cheek) Your wonderful words always make me smile, sweet friend, God Bless You, hope soon your gorgeous muse sparks new light for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Your muse isn't too far away me thinks enjoyed. Maree |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a perfect picture for your words..lovely Sue hugs M |
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