Open Poetry #26 |
Like you had |
whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
As the water rolled up towards my feet Like you had so many months ago I stood looking into the sun As disapeared did it from our sky Orange, pink red clouds held me Like you have so many times My eyes fixed on their magical colour Fading slowly returning grey As the breeze gently brushed against my skin Like you had the first time we met My skin chilled, shivering Breeze dying down to a stop As I walked up to my home and knocked Like you had the first time to my heart Waiting patiently to be let inside Door opened inwalked warmth As I called out to you aloud Like your soul had called to mine I saw your face appear Arms embracing love |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Julie, this is a beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it. I really liked this part. It made it not feel so sad... As I called out to you aloud Like your soul had called to mine I saw your face appear Arms embracing love "To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It's hard to think of finding beauty in sadness, but you've shown it to us here. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
whiskey - thought provoking when I read this... BC |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
Beautiful piece! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Julie, I liked this It was very well written I like the way you can draw so many comparisons, of nature, to one's personal life Great Job! Richy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sitting in silence |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely written..... QjQ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Julie, this is an exceptionally beautiful poem of love....thanx for sharing it with us. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thankyou everyone, your replys mean alot to me Julie |
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