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Im'm drunk |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california 
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I'M DRUNK AND Ii dont care what anyone thinks Gin and tonic yes I've had too many drinks but I dont care I do what i want but is this right to get drunk on a thursday night I do not know but i dont care my mind is a basement now without a stair CHASE what is my case what is my problem I do not care i do not care just gimmi another round of booze maybe the next round my pain will loose and ill be free from myself that is weak my future once vivid is now soo bleak I wont sit here and feel sorry for myself im haVING TOO MUCH FUNN being totally true and never have i once had envyed you untill now i wish i saw through your view I wish I had talents as golden as yours i wish i was perfect to forfill yours your dream your perfect preceptions on life and your methods of how you react to your daily triumph i wish i was you sted fast in your ways know always your good will outwiegh your bad days i envy your thoughts your manner your being i wish i could see what your good heart was seeing but i can't cuae im me and that's all ill ever be as long as i venture out in this world without thee... i miss you i love you i and i know i can fix it all but im too stupid to realize i just have to call ring ring i summon you out of the blue to confess that the love we shared is still ever true will i be smart and take part in this mending or will i be foolish and aid our love bending no no breaking my like it cuaes without your love I feel acking from lack of your presants so near i just want your breath to be upon me so near i love you im drunk and i know im noit making sence to anyone but me but i have to say this for myself to at least see for when im sobber ill read these words and sayy hey i ment every word that i ment to say even though i aid nothing atl all i feel a have tapped a source ready too call i love you kassie but how can an angel be in love withj a devil sent from hell to wreeck love ont an entirely new level your an agngel there is no dought about it i should be so lucky to embrace your love but im a fool and i cast you away secretly hoping you'll come bake some day i wish i hope i pray youll for give me for acting this childish way i love you kassie till my dieing day |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hey Im'm with youou  |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
wow...i just read this........i and very over the legel lemit of liquir and of love all things i cant taste ruin me quickley take heed make haste im going to bed to wreap what i sow im goin to go and try to forget all this shihteo[hererptre.. byre |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hang in there Jo. TD |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As you poured the gin and tonics in, you poured your heart and soul out... Warm hugs, EA |
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j-oh-E Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 59Texas, USA |
I really liked reading your poem. I hope it wasn't wrong that I laughed all through it. Was it meant to be that way? |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
I wrote this "poem"....in about 5 minutes flat and I didn't really know what I was doing, but now that I read it back, yeah you could view this as comical or serious. Picturing myself writing this and viewing all the obvious errors is pretty funny. I think I was serious when I wrote it though. I've never wrote anything really drunk before, it was weird. this is a fairly long "poem" for me and I wrote it so fast because I just didn't care what it sounded like, I just wanted to get my scrambled thoughts down. Thank you for reading my babble. Joe =) |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I think this stream of consciousness poured out of a bottle-It's kinda funny, kinda sad. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Joe - my favorite, gin and tonic, hic, hic... BC |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
The Babblefish Interpreter helps sometimes. LOL, I enjoyed this Joe, and seriously? I didn't evven have to go to the babblefish translator for any of it, and I'm glad the headache the next day was yours, not mine! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
water. aspirin. sleep. and a hug. (cute...but..wince, OUCH.) |
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