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Be Calm Heart
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Be Calm Heart |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. 
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Be Calm Heart Be calm my heart, it's just a rippling like pebbles of dew drops of her touch. My bed still unwrinkled, sleepless as I pace the carpet worn. Oh yes, I can feel the vibes for the dance of romance. The distant thunder has the beat for our hearts to dance. Love flashes in my mind like lighting across the sky. It's starting to rain. QjQ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is so sweet, and that "flutter" translated so well I could actually feel it as I read. Like a little snapshot of a private moment. Nicely done.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and let it rain! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nice~ raining here, too M |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Glenn, this is so breathtakingly beautiful, sweet friend, so let the rain fall and go singing in it as it is only the heavens responding! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Glenn, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Beautifully written, I like this alot. It has been raining here for weeks Julie |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well done, friend! Let it rain a torrent of love thoughts. |
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