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Rollercoaster Ride
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Rollercoaster Ride |
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dancnqeen New Member
since 2003-05-23
Posts 3Missouri, USA |
A nauseating roller coaster ride to nowhere (or maybe somewhere). The blind man opens his eyes to see only his reflection of a woman. The purging of a lifetime of sins, Feels as if it will not settle this soul. Getting off to piss, **** and sometimes eat. Sleep only slows the cart, not the ride. "Climb back aboard to purge your funnel cake and more",the operator bellows. Is the riddenence of resentment that simple? Remember always That I see said the blind man, ever asked what he saw? Do you suppose a bird thinks about it's feathers during flight? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
an interesting blend of sureal visions and psychological insights... not sure I understand it all but it does paint vivid images in the readers mind.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write |
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