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JingleBear
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since 2003-05-08
Posts 76
Pennsylvania, USA

0 posted 2003-05-22 04:47 PM


The unread letter spinning in my head.
What did it say?
Why was its envelope red?

I should have read it when I had the chance.
Before the wind swept it away,
preventing even one small glance!

Was it my grandmother's will?
Was it important ?
Or just another bill?

Maybe it was a simple flyer,
saying their company was short handed
and needed someone to hire.

Maybe it was a love letter,
saying I was his world,
and that there was none better.

Maybe it was addressed "only to the scholars,"
saying I had been selected,
to receive a million dollars!

Maybe it was just some annoying chain,
saying, "The ghosts will get ya,
if you do not send this down the lane!"

Maybe it was from Hollywood
saying I was picked to star in
the upcoming hit,"Gone for good."

Then the mailman knocked on my door,
I said "hello sir,"
he grumbled, "I found this over at address four."

He handed me a paper smelling of lard,
it was the unread letter!
...which turned out to be my awful report card...



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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2003-05-22 05:14 PM


Enjoyed the flow of the events...and the unread letter. Something to peak the curiousity, and the spirit, and the ending was great. TD
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2003-05-23 05:06 AM


great write!
Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-05-23 09:29 AM



Cute read!

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