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Patricia
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0 posted 2003-05-22 01:09 PM


Day's End

Breathless, her final moment,
she whisper her covenant,
in last will and testament.
She and I in agreement,
sigh a silent sigh of content
In the blessings she hath sent
and all splendor she represent.


[This message has been edited by Patricia (05-22-2003 01:13 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-05-22 01:40 PM



A lovely tribute
to the passing of Day...
no wonder she retires
in rays of gold...

Beautiful, Patricia!

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-05-23 05:08 AM


wow...
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3 posted 2003-05-23 07:49 AM


Very beautiful.
Eric

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4 posted 2003-05-23 08:45 AM


Patricia, this was simply lovely.

Warm hugs,
Linda

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5 posted 2003-05-23 09:23 AM


Pretty write Pat.
Sunset is a wonderous time to ponder. TD

HopeS
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6 posted 2003-05-23 09:56 AM


most beautifully expresed Patricia
Hope

Nan
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7 posted 2003-05-23 09:59 AM


'Tis a lovely twilight indeed...
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