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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA 
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SIMPLY PUT... I want you here! To hear your voice saying my name. To hear your teasing laughter. I want to see the serious side of you that I so seldom see. I want to see the glitter in your eyes when you are playing. I want to feel your breath on my cheek, your arms around me. I want to feel your body close to me. I want the nearness of you. Simply put, my darling, I want you here! If only for a while... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
wow another great write of poetry!!!! keep writing and i will keep reading,, QjQ |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Kitty, simply put, this is great! Another great write I have read of yours.  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
LOL...QjQ I need more people like you in my corner. You my friend has made my night! Thank you sincerely! Kitty** |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Saunni..You and QjQ have me feeling pretty dog gone GOOD about now! Thank you for reading. I don't always come up with sumpin good...LOL... Kitty** |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh yes...I do know this one. Beautifully said. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I want to see the glitter in your eyes when you are playing. Simply stated~ I loved the heart tug and the playfullness, all wrapped into one. Kitty~ you are so good to read!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that said it all! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I know this... I know it so well. *sigh* Great write, made for a great read. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kitty! There you are! Great to see your sweet face and read your touching poetry! It may be "Simply Put", but you really reach out and pull your readers in!  Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
To put it simply, this is a good poem. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Say it like it is! Enjoyed this, Kitty! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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