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Time in a Bottle
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Time in a Bottle |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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If you could put moments in a bottle then I would bottle all my time with you like sweet wine to the palate so is every memory of you. At first we may overlook the moment until it is gone the farther we look back at moments we share long ago the sweeter the taste and the smoother it goes down. If you could put time in a bottle what moments would you save and which would you try to forever forget. If I could put time in a bottle I would save every moment I've spent with you *loosely inspired by the song by Jim Croce of the same name. |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
"If I could put time in a bottle I would save every moment I've spent with you" I liked this! Yes, there have been many precious memories that I would save in a bottle, that are only saved in memories... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson [This message has been edited by El_Campeador (05-22-2003 01:23 PM).] |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Love the song, love the poem :-) Great job Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you! |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Into your bottle waits a savory wine that gets sweeter with age and bolder with time. quatro |
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