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The tale of unseesn people
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The tale of unseesn people |
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X Q poet Junior Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 47 |
The tale of unseen people, whose voice I never heard Their hopes and dreams and lives were all discarded as absurd They never breathed the lovely air with which I fill my chest They fell victim to the murder, which I do detest Defenseless little creatures, within their mother's womb The ones who should have loved them, became their grave and tomb Yet I cannot hate them, the mothers of the lost Who pay their dues a lifetime, who's shouldering the cost I try to keep my voice down, while I loudly speak my mind Not lower expectations, but attempting to be kind The tale unwinds in secret, and suddenly stopped short For with the tiny instruments, the tale it will contort And so I weep in silence for the little people's lot That weren't deemed important, oh those children, finely wrought http://www.xqpoetry.com <-- poetry, philosophy, journal and discussion |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
X Q poet THe piece is well written. |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Yes...  Sunkised. |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
I enjoyed reading this. You have a lot to say and you say it well. You have done well. quatro |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well written |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...yeah |
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X Q poet Junior Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 47 |
Thanks guys... Three cheers for him or her who can tell what it's about... No prizes though, it should be easy...  http://www.xqpoetry.com <-- poetry, philosophy, journal and discussion |
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