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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Who's stronger? you? stand just outside sunlight where rays fail to reach in hopes of thawing denying yourself & others so much warmth Who's weaker? I? revealer of secrets pounding upon sleeve in hopes of recieving yet never quite believing standing still while moving on Who's stronger? you? set fire to page igniting yet as quick as lightening snuff flames joke or game? who's weaker? I? accept without bet and pay my debt of whatever I may or may not get... it's all on me, see... Who wins? Don't we both? Sunkissed. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunkissed. Sounds right to me, enjoyed. |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thank you Seymour for reading and commenting.  Sunkissed. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I got the image of a magnifying glass being held to tinder... You do keep me intrigued with your writing... keep it up! |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thanks Sunshine! always nice to see your insightful comment beneath my work! Sunkissed. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thank you Brad. Sunkissed. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I liked the way you wrote this one...good questions set in a portrait of deafening silence. TD |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
What a great write! By the way, I love your name. It's cool! Sauni The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S[This message has been edited by Saunni (05-22-2003 10:11 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool! |
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