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Open Poetry #26

Taste of Honey

Kitty**
Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2003-05-22 10:10 PM

TASTE OF HONEY

As we moved in rhythm
I could see him there above me.
Oh God I loved this man.

And my heart cried.
My soul cried.

Such sweet ecstasy for me,
but mundane for him.
Will he remember this
tomorrow?
Will he relive
this journey that has
taken me to heavens door?

And again my heart
and my soul cried.

For he had been there
before with another,
whom he had loved as
I now love him.
And now I wait
for the nearness
of him.
With love
With yearning!

How can the taste of honey
be so bitter?

* That which gives light, must endure burning *

[This message has been edited by Kitty** (05-22-2003 10:13 PM).]

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

1 posted 2003-05-22 10:15 PM

Kitty, oh, this is awesome, touching, honest, beautiful and a sad write! Incredible!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-05-22 10:19 PM

gee i'm speechless,, what a nice write and read of poetry,,

QjQ

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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3 posted 2003-05-23 04:56 AM

great write!

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