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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
We allow this kiss to be more. Expanding in the fullness of each other - We surrender. Becoming as the kiss. More. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
So much passion expressed in so few words. You are the master of romantic verse, Ericc. -Patricia |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Eric ... in this poem the word "More" holds a whole WORLD in it. Wonderfully stirring. Love, Margherita  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Becoming as the kiss. More." Excellent!! Hugs, Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sheesh. I keep telling myself... alone, quiet... not when there's folks wandering around wondering why you're sighing at 8:16 CST!!!! |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
The simplicity of words only heightens the brilliance of this. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 Another good one, Eric."To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Boundless. An extraordinary piece Eric. TD |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) It is always far more than a kiss itself, the kiss is truly an epiphany, a gate opening wide breathing with light to a world of new possibilities! (big hugggsssssss) There's always more than you think there is, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always short and sweet |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Sweet, clear, true beauty... no mistaking the incredible love in your words. What beautiful magic you weave with words. Breathtaking... clear, bright, and warmer than blue skies on a sunny day. You are truly amazing. I love you, Moca |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Perfectly beautiful Sandra |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
absolutely beautiful and so perfectly said. Maree |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
A kiss for you Poet. Beautiful. Love, Etain, the same. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Hmm.  SG |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...Heavenly... |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
nice idea behind the intent to be intimate, enjoyed |
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teledon Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 51Florida USA |
I have always believed that "brevity is the soul of wit" .. beautifully done "keep it simple" |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
Sweet surrender, great piece. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Expanding in the fullness of each other - Yes....just so. A pretty little piece of poetry -- captured the moment so well! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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