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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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cleaved from the cap ten percent is all you are allowed it saves you from the truth it teems it teems it want's to be afraid of you and it gets nourishment from the mix this deep waves you will never see movement as city hearts and minds won with compassion a pity a pity do not sink on this |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
An interesting and thought provoking piece.... Thanks for making me think!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn! it saves you from the truth...yes...I will settle for ten percent |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . it wants to be afraid of you . . . this line got to me Bri . . . pondering over here . . . like always after reading you brilliant . . . just . . . xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-18-2003 05:17 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The ten percent I'm allowed is maddening as it is... teeming, yanno? Of course you do. The madman viking strikes again... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
and some of us teem from much less than 10% an interesting write and what might happen if you accessed another 10%? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Methinks this needs another read. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I'm with Wranx...another read...several Well done Bri TD |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think you left the deeper part of this beneath the brine, bri... most assuredly, this cries for a 2nd, 3rd or 4th read... if for no other reason, but to see how it capsizes others.... well done, sir! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
gd keep up coming fast and furious me'boyo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
This warrented several reads. You say ten percent, well the other 90% was pretty intense.  Left me thinking! SG |
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