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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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Senseless Translucent ray Opaque gray Uncolored day Spiced distaste Bland baste Bittered waste Without perfume Odorless gloom Unscented tomb Acoustics bound Deafening sound Silenced ground Numbed touch Emotional crutch Iced clutch In regress, I digress... Senseless |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
i enjoyed this, it has my attention. A thought from a stranger is cherished, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your "Senseless" is sad--but absolutely sensational! Healing hugs, Linda |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Don't you just hug it when nonsensical "stuff" is perfectly understood? Me do! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Patricia - h'mmm, two words per line, nice. And much meaning to them, must have taken a while to write... BC |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Patricia, You have done well here and have captured my senses. Keep up the good work. quatro |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
For Patricia Senseful Brilliant beam Glistening stream Vivid dream Pleasing zest Love attest Unprofessed Fragrant Scent Sheer content Heaven sent Silent mood Interlude Gratitude Grazing feel Soft appeal Gentle heal Beautiful Meaningful Senseful Patricia, I hope soon, you receive all the happiness you deserve... Wonderful write! Richy [This message has been edited by Richy (05-22-2003 02:03 PM).] |
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