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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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Can you tread on sacred ground and not remember? feel the passion and now be so cold? Can two hearts once joined ever really be apart? When did you start loving me and how did you stop? If candle's flame still burns deep in my soul are you out there somewhere feeling the same? I know I'll live on by I will always die again at mention of your name. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Have known this feeling well in my own life...you express it to the enth degree. Your writing grows deeper, and I appreciate the share. Have always thought that cup that was full, had no room for more... TD |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
keep asking the questions... one day you will have the answers to quite a lot of them if not all of them... but keep the chin up...  regards, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (05-22-2003 12:12 PM).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sometimes, it's best not to know all of the answers. . . very reflective and contemplative . . . great work. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...don't it bite?  |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
It's sad.. Why do we humans have to create such emptiness in the hearts of others? “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you for reading |
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