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Open Poetry #26

Rainy Day

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2003-05-21 09:21 AM

The water now falls
Drenching me from the gray skies,
And my sadness calls
Pounding the window in sighs
I’m like the day that cries.

I don’t mind drenching,
The wet clothes and dripping hair
My spirit lynching
With unemotional care,
The pelting tells me I’m there.

Rain all the day long,
Drown me till I’m nevermore,
Sing me rain’s dirge song,
Not a drizzle let it pour,
Drench me to my spirit’s core

Gloom

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-05-21 09:32 AM

This one has the feel...
and my skin stings at the pelting...

thank you, Professor!

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2003-05-21 09:47 AM

Thank you, Sunshine
for you kind response.

Gloom

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-05-21 09:56 AM

I have had that experience, and believe me, it could not be more perfectly--or poetically--expressed than you have just done with this exceptionally descriptive write. I feel for you, my dear professor...
Let it pour and wash all pains and sorrows away.

May the sun come out from hiding and dry up all the rain--and your tears,

Toasty warm hugs,
EA

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2003-05-21 10:39 AM

Thank you, Earth Angel,
You are kind with the words of your response.

Gloom

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