Open Poetry #26 |
My Heart Grew Fonder |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
My Heart Grew Fonder Did I annoy and irritate Pestering obsessively Then I must apologise For writing consistently The penning of feelings My hearts confession That someone special Became my obsession Attempting to reach you The only way I know By writing you poems With a continuous flow As my heart grew fonder The more I would write My depths of devotion Are spread with delight Forevemore on my mind You shall always be I hope you understand By accepting my apology Hope ©2003 |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hope, you know that this hopeless romantic loves this, and I definitely believe that he loves your romantic poems to him, too. I know that my Honey-Love loves mine, and I'll bet yours loves yours loves yours, too. Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS Beauty is where beauty lives, very nice. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thanks Ethel , yes I am an hopeless romantic , but he as seen both my happy and sad sides since writing Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Seymour , yes beuaty is in the eye of the beholder , so I hope he can see what I see Hope |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
For every obsession there is someone who feeds it....wether they mean to or not. Don't you ever apologize Hope, it's what makes for good poetry~ And you write so darn well~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) There's never no need to apologize for that, sweet friend, I would be speaking for every poet when I say we all always write and we do so to breathe, to live, and it is what helps make life colorful! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
HopeS, your writings are wonderful. Remember to be true to yourself even if you write sad along with happy. Whatever be the emotion, it is just that, an emotion. All which will pass. But, never put a time limit on it. Stay loyal to you in whatever you may feel when you feel it. It's never wrong. Beautiful write. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have to echo the above comments...good writing here Hope |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is wonderful. It is funny how when you write one poem, the flood gate opens and several others follow. It becomes an addiction as Sunshine said to me yesterday. We write because we must. Never apologize for that because it is part of you, the way you are meant to be. I have a friend who says I should be focusing on other things in my life rather than poetry. He does not understand if I didn't write, I could not focus at all. So, let it go. Write! -Patricia |
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