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ptwils165
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0 posted 2003-05-22 07:50 PM


Shy whispers from an overturned page
tell of sibling summers, and soft towels
scraping sand from tiny toes
as dad rests on the coastline wall.
Papering pink feet with care,
he is determined, yet smiling
as if he somehow knows
that his youth lies here with ours.

On the right, my sister, with an ice-cream
tipped to the ground,  a falling tower
half-gripped by four miniature fingers.
They forget their purpose, as holiday hours
detonate sights and infant sounds
to frames forever forming.
Two children wonder, not in confusion,
but in amazement.

As aching tides strengthen with every sigh,
and sifting seas refuse to tire,
shards of antique rock
emboss our memories of a neon sky.
They sharpen this picture of hazy june
against a backdrop of laughing sands,
and the shadows which will never miss the pacific
as we do.

[This message has been edited by ptwils165 (05-22-2003 07:55 PM).]

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-05-22 09:07 PM


good read

QjQ

whiskey
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2 posted 2003-05-22 09:10 PM


I have some scrapbooks just like you describe they are great to look back on remembering all the things in the photos
Great piece, I enjoyed it very much


Julie

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-05-23 05:03 AM


sort of melancholic but beautiful too
ptwils165
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4 posted 2003-05-23 07:03 AM


thanks guys for your replies, it's appreciated, especially as I can't seem to write anything right now - this is the first post in weeks, i'm struggling.....
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