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Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

0 posted 2003-05-20 10:34 PM

In Darkness, Wait

Mine head rests in thoughts,
those of Thee, whence first
we did meet, beside the running waters,
a Willow Tree for cover.

In darkness, wait
these thoughts permeate the night,
overcoming the loneliness felt,
when Thine touch, left me
for another.

I oft recall last summer's breeze.
It's hold, gliding me airborne in memories,
swinging to the rhythm of,
mine heart's beat, to and fro.

Whilst I never again, feel the temptation
of the full moon's pull, of it's glow,
nor holding Thee, close in mine arms?

~~*~~

"To tap the layers, mind of mine
to reach and pool thine silver thoughts
enriching nightfall, in it's glow
'tis mine, 'tis thee, thine words be caught."

Blinded am I without...
Thy morning words.

Lady Ollyne

[This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (05-20-2003 10:42 PM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-05-20 11:17 PM

My Lady - tender are your words, your touch of pen, your kiss of softness when you write. Always yours...

BC

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-05-21 01:28 AM

It's hold, gliding me airborne in memories~

I loved the pull in this~

So fine are your lines Lady O~

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

3 posted 2003-05-21 03:14 AM

Wonderful piece, I enjoyed it very much

Julie

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-05-21 03:46 AM

a fine piece of work!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-05-21 06:51 AM

Lady Ollyne, your words read as a
classic piece of art. Very beautiful.

Kilgore3
New Member

since 2003-05-21

Posts 4

6 posted 2003-05-21 06:56 AM

very touching poem...enjoyed the read

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2003-05-21 09:23 AM

LadyOllyne~
I LIKE it when the lady pens~

Beautifully done~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-05-21 11:24 AM

nice

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2003-05-21 11:25 AM

nice

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2003-05-21 12:27 PM

ahhh. . . yes, again Poet Fair, we are but only mortals in awe of words such these that thou sharest with us. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2003-05-22 09:22 AM

Ah my friend Lady...
'tis insightful is thy pen
this lovely day...

far and away
a pleasureable write...

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