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waiting impatiently painfully
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waiting impatiently painfully |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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There is black remorse inside every breath the millionth minute bows and I still have no voice Keeping still between music coochie coo no laughter jolts me from how i statue my words White calm songs of comfort i hide away for recovery and not before heavy apology dawns. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
"no laughter jolts me from how i statue my words" a most interesting phrase (hope things have improved) - - - - S Arthur |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Live every moment in time like it's your last, because after those minutes pass, they can't be brought back again... So when you wait, do it with all your heart, not as one who is dying for a lack of something in the future, but as one who is content with what she has today. And then the "black remorse" disappears... Sorry for rambling on. Just some thoughts after reading this one  “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You can wait the way a nest waits for the bird's egg to arrive, or you can wait the way a golfer waits for his ball to arrive in the cup..... I suggest the latter..... A nice read -- worth waiting for.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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