Open Poetry #26 |
Listen |
SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Listen And the rain stopped The trees were still clouds took their leave listen, he said be still close your eyes do not let the sounds of the pavement fool you they are there calling each other no noise will shut them out nature's calling suddenly, the sun came out the birds fluttered and the chipmunks scurried across the grass Do not move, he said as his lips favored her ear hush, he whispered I love you... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*sigh* definately whispering to me...lovely..I love a soft breeze and the rain..so soothing and romantic..as this is... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (05-20-2003 04:36 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
listen, he said be still close your eyes do not let the sounds of the pavement fool you they are there calling each other no noise will shut them out nature's calling ============================ this reads feather light...like a whisper on the wind.. love the surreal and romantic essence. So good to see your name here again SG. I refuse to accept that mankind is so tragically bound to the starless midnight of racism & war that the daybreak of peace can never be reality. |
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JingleBear Member
since 2003-05-08
Posts 76Pennsylvania, USA |
This is so beautiful! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
SG ~ I listened to the sounds--and they were divine! Simply golden... Loving hugs, EA |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Well done...well done. You perfectly captured that moment and brought us into it. Thank you for that. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Electra, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you always write so beautifully and I am so happy you're back! (kiss on cheek) Keep singing with the orioles, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Electra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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