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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Civic Boys Boys in Hondas ride low and chic, black and silver with spoilers sleek, fancy themselves on a race course, spin round with centrifugal force and cross three lanes all in one move. These boys have got something to prove. With so much plastic by design, the reaper says these boys are mine! © 2003 |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sounds like southern California to me, Corinne - I'm not getting in the way of any of you...  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Boys will be boys, then they turn into men, that's when the trouble starts. LOL  Just kidding you guys, couldn't resist a little male bashing. Fun write Corinne~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Nan. Yep, Cali. Teen male drivers seems to covet Honda Civics these days. They drive them like they're Corvettes, but they're tiny cars with no protection. And hey, not all of us get to live near a lighthouse! You know I envy that! Thanks Blues! Haha! Core |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wasn't too long ago that two cars full of teenagers was racing on the North Shore and one of the cars lost control and smashed into a palm tree and that was the end of that...james |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice! good write! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Corrine, I really felt like I was watching the boys driving. This was cute.  Hugs, Ethel |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the message is loud and clear. . . great work. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
well written with much truth... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
and cross three lanes all in one move. These boys have got something to prove. With so much plastic by design, the reaper says these boys are mine! Something like this happened here about a month ago, again small hotted up cars but one ended up wrapped around a telegraph pole, the driver died on impact, he had been decapitated. He was only 18.  Well written Corrine. Maree p.s He was driving a Honda, true that. Not sure if it was a civic though. [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (05-20-2003 07:06 PM).] |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Intersting title twist as well. S Arthur |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
It happens here, it happens there. These children are killing themselves everywhere. It was the same when I was young, they will find a way. And then, (as Lori says)some may turn into men. (Proving perhaps, Darwin to be correct) Gads |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yes -- followed some of those goobers down the street today in their little black Civic with the oversized tailpipe and aftermarket tail light lenses..... Resisted (barely) the temptation to introduce them to the superior power of Accord Man! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) It saddens me deeply to see all those car commericals out there today, sweet friend, how a good looking car seems to be capital to success and how you have to drive to look good, and how so many call driving "freedom" when really you are under so much more responsibility that many never examine! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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