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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-05-20 02:13 PM


Addressing Thunder

in a mistake
I heard the cooing
of the wind
as it addressed
the thunder
a name called
upon the night
left in letters
of a storm
sadly searching
where love
had left me
in another
lightening strike
alone
a simple
raining down
promising strength
and I am not
afraid of
its power
for I
am enough, yes,
I am enough

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-05-20 02:21 PM


how old is old enough lol  

nice write!!!

Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason.

Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-05-20 02:35 PM


if i haven't said it before i love your words
Ericc
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3 posted 2003-05-20 04:20 PM


More than enough.
Eric

S Arthur Grey
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4 posted 2003-05-20 06:13 PM


I've challenged a thunderstorm or two.
Gotta know when to quit.
If you hear the sizzle before the crack of lightning, you are too close.

S Arthur

1slick_lady
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5 posted 2003-05-20 06:15 PM


not to worry Sir...i have now learned my lesson...h
jwesley
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6 posted 2003-05-20 08:54 PM


Loved this....though it wasn't thunder but the drumming of my heart, and yes, you are definitely...enough.


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7 posted 2003-05-20 08:57 PM


Yes, we are if we know it....thank you, Helen.

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8 posted 2003-05-20 09:26 PM


oh yes!!!!! loved this one of your best
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