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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-05-18 03:27 AM

The dead can walk yes
the body too stubborn to
stop breathing just yet

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

1 posted 2003-05-18 03:47 AM

Strange....but enjoyed!!!!
I like these little poems a lot!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2003-05-18 03:47 AM

Raffaele! This is so impressive and sadly so true for many who do not really live .... all of us at times, I think.
You think it's the matter clinging to the soul? Or the opposite ... the soul insisting that this body and mind will begin to LIVE?
Buona domenica!
Love, Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-05-18 04:05 AM

cool! very cool!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-05-18 04:24 AM

Raph:

yes . . . the dead do walk - amazingly
but it is no time for the breathing
to cease . . .
the music is still playing . . .

amazing as always you are
xxoo

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2003-05-18 06:51 PM

GAWD Raph, you hafta stop peeking into my life...this is powerful!

I'm sure you've heard the song "Feel" by Robbie Williams...well usually I hate pop songs and artists, but this song is actually deep. For some reason your senryu reminded me of it, and the line in it: "I don't want to die, but, I'm not keen on living either."

Your senryu is poignant, and I'm saving it~

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Gina Culliney
Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 170

6 posted 2003-05-18 07:20 PM

Chilling right down to the bone! well penned
as usual!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-05-19 02:18 AM

thanks justbleu

I'm not sure margherita, just what it is yet
abbraci

thanks Dixie

Sue music? well crank up the volume you know these ears don't hear so well anymore

Melissa yeah I know it and that is a great line thanks for stoppin by

Thanks for the kind words Gina

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-05-19 10:07 AM

well I have been trying to send you some new stuff already . . .

there - can ya hear that - im screaming over here! My windows are shattering . . .

hehehe

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2003-05-19 01:22 PM

A'ite

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

10 posted 2003-05-20 06:23 PM

I've said for many years - many people that have lost their dreams - are dead... just waiting to be buried. great write my friend
And could ya keep it down little, the dogs are crying - lmao - just teasing. music?....
Well it IS better than country I guess - lol

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2003-05-20 07:02 PM

My, gawd, that's heavy! You evoke such strong emotions in me---every time I read you! I guess that is why I keep coming back for more!

Warm hugs--I think you need them!
EA

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

12 posted 2003-05-20 09:18 PM

Dream thanks and as for country, what do you get when you play a country record backwards? You get back your girl your dog and your pick up truck..

Linda always appreciate you coming back

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