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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-05-20 12:00 PM



I close my eyes and dream of you
and what our life would be
if you and I were joined as 'us'
and souls were entwined as one

I touch my lips and dare imagine
how soft your lips would feel
A kiss from you would heal for sure
all the breaks love gave my heart

I trace my fingers down my arms
imagining your arms around me
To know that no harm could come
and that you would protect me

Until that time is reality
please know one thing for sure
you are in my heart and in my mind
In my dreams and in reality

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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1 posted 2003-05-20 12:19 PM


*I trace my fingers down my arms
imagining your arms around me
To know that no harm could come
and that you would protect me


very well expressed loving thoughts

Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason.

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-05-20 02:04 PM


nice
Toerag
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3 posted 2003-05-20 02:30 PM


thank you so much for writing this to me....LOL.....and whatever you do, don't let on what we do in those dreams...ya hear?
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4 posted 2003-05-20 02:34 PM


beautiful
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5 posted 2003-05-20 03:09 PM


(LOL at our Toerag...HeeHee!!)


I really like this, Kristie Sue. Especially
this part....

Until that time is reality
please know one thing for sure
you are in my heart and in my mind
In my dreams and in reality


Thanks for sharing this.  

"To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin
~with heart hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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6 posted 2003-05-20 04:20 PM


I trace my fingers down my arms
imagining your arms around me
To know that no harm could come
and that you would protect me

Until that time is reality
please know one thing for sure
you are in my heart and in my mind
In my dreams and in reality
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some one has lit a fire in your muse.
lovely writing from the heart.
So good to see your poetry back on the blue pages KS.

I refuse to accept that mankind is so tragically bound to the starless midnight of racism & war that the daybreak of peace can never be reality.
MLK

KristieSue
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7 posted 2003-05-20 08:24 PM


QjQ, Brad, and Aenimal~~
                              Thank you!!!!!
Ethel~~
               Thanks...I really do appreciate it.  I'm glad that you liked that part cause I wasn't feeling too strong about that!  

Toe~~
           How'd ya know I love ya so?!!  Your secret is safe with me.  We'll keep it hush~hush.

Janet Marie~~
              Thank you.  I don't know if I've found my muse ever, but I am in the mood to write at the moment and I am taking advantage of it.  Thanks for noticing!!!

XO y'all...

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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