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Four Ways ( In Memory Of)
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Four Ways ( In Memory Of) |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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In Memory Of My Aunt... Pamela Ann Wallace Barr Jan. 27,1949 - May 14,2003 Four Ways Running wildly but never really moving much I caught my breath in the God help me kind of way I think I'd just forgotten how to inhale any life The moment I witnessed your Independence Day... Didn't come easily for you as my prayers to the skies But, surely, I only had four ways to fall Silently, effortless, whole heartedly, and to my knees Where on my way down I imbedded them all... I know there was just never enough true light So, the earth simply couldn't hold you here But, a single memory, every second, touched this heart And, a little bit of life fell with every tear... Nothing pleasant in the passing of good-bye Though you found your four ways to going home Ever graciously, anxiously, happy, and willing But, never having to make that journey alone... Heart to heart and hand to tightly clutched hand We viewed ever final and our end to this forever To remember, to value, to treasure, and to smile Are the clearest four ways to keep us together... You left your mark for the whole world to see But, I only had four ways to help relieve me It was up, down and left then right The sign of the cross in the deep dark night... Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
a very nice rememberance, thought and written well Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A lovely prayer, and deeply heartfelt. Bless you in your sorrow Saunni~ |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Saunni, so sad  done so well I know your aunt would be proud of this Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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JingleBear Member
since 2003-05-08
Posts 76Pennsylvania, USA |
A very nice write and really showed feeling. I'm sorry for your loss. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Saunni, my heart goes out to your loss, but know your loving aunt Pamela will always be guiding you north, south, east, and west...from the Tropic of Cancer to the Tropic of Capricorn and on both sides of the Prime Meridian, from sea to shining sea, and will never forget you! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all send extra special angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing! May love and light awlays shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm sorry for your loss, Saunni. By this write, it's obvious she will always remain with you in spirit. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Saunni...  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
adding my prayers for you my friend. . .you speak well here. . . always good to see you. . .  -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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