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human thunderstorms |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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As thunderous thunderstorms brew over a rocky mountained view, my musing mood becomes hued with a crescendo of loud colors as the sky is infused with bloody crimson, splattering the cobalt blue sky, forcing me to wonder why even billowing bursts of creamy white clouds cannot cover up the tears I cry in anger and sheer frustration for this human race that must surely face a higher power some day. And what will we say when we come face-to-face with whatever or whoever rightfully rules our universe? For it surely cannot be you or me, for we are too petty, stupid and rude, and even the lowest snake in the grass offers up more honesty and sensibility in acceptance of his position, and does not pretend to rule both heaven and earth. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
this write really express feelings well written. Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
it's just the highly charged electrical energy field surging through my fragile mind and heart thanks for reading Q |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
So true these words but all yours are.. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Did I ever tell you how much I love you my dear poet friend?  |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
enjoyed!!! as well as all your recent post.i believe you've refired my muse,wish i could bottle your magic and keep it on a shelf till needed but then it wouldn't be as special as it is...would it???  Live like it's your last day... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat thoughts |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kacy, this is a really powerful write.... and has so much truth...... at times, anyway.  Bye for now, Kacy  Hugs, Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Goodness Kacy: this just about sums it all up now doesnt it? what a strong write and yes - we all have to face the music - so no tears please you will be one among the many who will get their wings - the rest - well we can only hope they face their own souls beforehand Amzing writing sis truly thinking this one over xxoo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Up on my feet to thank you for this one! ...even the lowliest snake in the grass knows his place... Quoting from memory...LOL...a great line here. TD |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thanking each of you for your part, in completing my adjusted view, of the rainbow that hopefully always follows even the most frightening storm |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  liked this |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thank you so much, Vandana! |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
a yes to this |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
for some reason, i thought of human cannonballs that go zoom! zoom! into the starry starry night and even the lowest snake in the grass offers up more honesty and sensibility in acceptance of his position, what biting sarcasm on the human race! I had to smile wryly |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wow, Kacy! You made me sit up straight and take notice! That was one hellova fine piece of writing!--a very powerful message! Loving hugs, Linda |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
human cannonballs? ROTFL at that one kaile and thanks Brian and Linda, for reading and commenting |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kacy... you do create silver linings... Well done, m'dear! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thanks sunshine according to kaile I generate human cannonballs too  (OMG, that sounds so bizarre!) |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
At least the frustration is a source of energy for you. A great poem. Thank you for calming down enough to share it. *smile* |
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