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Open Poetry #26

Lost In Your Eyes (EdItIon)

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2003-05-19 06:21 PM

When I saw your eyes
There was something
In your eyes
That caputures my heart
I fell in love
with your beautiful eyes
I see stars and sun
In your eyes
I could see love
In your eyes
I won't hide
my feelings for you
Because I know
I will stay alive
because of your eyes and love
Iam lost in the clouds
above the sky
Iam lost
In your loving eyes
Iam lost in your eyes
Wondered so many songs
of yesterday
Fell in love with these songs
Iam still lost in love
with you
Iam lost in your love
Iam lost in your heart
Iam lost in your eyes
and everything.......

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-05-19 06:23 PM

very good write

Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2003-05-19 07:07 PM

And I got lost in your poetic write. Good job.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2003-05-19 08:49 PM

V. nothing like a set of eyes that just
cannot help but be looked at...I have
always said that through the eyes is the
soul....

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

4 posted 2003-05-19 08:51 PM

Very nice, enjoyed

Julie

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-05-19 09:15 PM

(smiles) To your sweetheart, this will be a special edition forever! (kiss on cheek) may you always look through loves eyes forever more, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2003-05-19 09:17 PM

vandana

Eyes can do that to you when you love, they have to me. Enjoyed!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2003-05-19 10:05 PM

I agree, the eyes can draw me in too

nicely done

hugsss
M

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