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tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

0 posted 2003-05-17 08:21 PM

Somewhere
a long time ago
i remember once
i kissed you
with the rain pouring down
do you remember
how we danced
til dawn
then we sat and watched
the sun as it rose
turning a brilliant fire red
i remember
there with you
standing there
holding your hand
but that was so long ago
back when nothing mattered
but you never knew
that those were my dreams
did you know
i was broken hearted
wishing you’d give me the chance
my first love
you’ll never know
that somewhere
a long time ago
i dreamed
but all dreams
die

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-05-17 08:24 PM

sad
maybe a new dream
is in order?
well written pain

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-05-17 08:59 PM

very nice write and thoughts

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-05-17 11:47 PM

Seems like dreams die but I believe that they are moved to another time and location...James

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

4 posted 2003-05-17 11:52 PM

Perhaps dreams die so they can be born again.

Well written, thank you for sharing it.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-05-18 12:31 PM

I had dreams like that long ago and not by choice, I, once again have another chance
to have new ones.

nicely done
M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-05-18 12:45 PM

yes, that's sad...

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-05-18 05:01 AM

God Jess - I love your style
and yes they do die
but new ones sprout in their place

this is a bleed . . .
amazing write
xxoo

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-05-19 10:27 PM

but you never knew
that those were my dreams

When nothing mattered expect for a dream!
Can I ever relate. This is so pretty, and filled with bittersweetness.

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