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Sanctuary (for Aenimal) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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The battle cry has just begun clash of sword rings true I knew the look the glint of steel blood fresh on face a stain of grace music streaming soul screaming for something new Dear Knight lay down your sword rest your mind your weary load place your brow within my hands let me wash your spirit free understand your place your heart and face armor tinged arduous escape from fight within To you my lace I freely give and water fresh for you to live until the dawn the next display a brand new sun then dying day Warm your feet and rest your mind by fire ablaze and silent shroud of resilent wings wrapped and bound upon and around you now . . . Dear Knight h-u-s-h . . . eyes closed silence the only sound In reply to: /pip/Forum79/HTML/002009.html |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 YES! this is magnificent! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Stunning write Sue, Raph will love this, as I did. Jason |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sue...this is just beautiful...h |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Sheesh! You sure stay busy proping the rest of us up... Your pen is a healing instrument. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful words from a beautiful person, thank you much |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, every knight deserves rest from the joust of life and should be honored with the chalice of life! (big hugggsssssss) I am sure this sip of poetic rosewater will heal his heart with a smile, yay, God Bless You Both, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the quiet sound in your intensity, you soar with the best of them Tweets~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
oh wow, that does sound nice.... awfully nice. It being 4:45 AM and my not having slept.. all that peace and gentleness sounds like a sin.. I'm not even sure it exists! lol Beautiful and compassionate. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
littlewing A very good write, enjoyed the read. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent writing on both parts... I am smiling on you! |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
what an incredible write - I'm in awe Aenimal - You are fortunate to have such a friend - a blessing indeed Oh & hmmmmm... Self proclaimed knight grabs number to be next - lol . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful, lw *s M |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very wonderfully written...mucho enjoyed jwesley |
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aran Junior Member
since 2003-05-18
Posts 34 |
wow! that was a fantastic poem. I wish i could read more works with the potency, the poignance, the luster of that work. Absolutely tremendous! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
dream I am no doubt I am |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sweet.......Every knight should have such a lady..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sue, this is beautiful, you've actually left this chatterbox speechless. You're lucky to have each other. I'm saving this~ Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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