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Tears of a lover, Tears of a friend.
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Tears of a lover, Tears of a friend. |
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kauai Junior Member
since 2003-05-18
Posts 12 |
The Lakes are flooding and I know not why, I balled up my fists and started to cry, Solitude is your enemy, when the worlds not your friend,will thoughts of inadequacy cease to end? When you're in the river, it's bigger then it seems Take a couple steps back, it's only a stream. The storm is over, el nino is gone, Now time to wait for el nina to spawn. "This is the ish, yall ain't ready for" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sometimes solitude can be your friend... M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a very interesting piece much wisdom in this steam of words WELCOME to Passions, cutie! [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (05-19-2003 02:39 PM).] |
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dani Junior Member
since 2003-05-10
Posts 46 |
that was cool occasionly i feel i'm drowning in an ocean and can't get out solitude can be both a friend and an enemy |
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ladypisces76 Junior Member
since 2003-05-16
Posts 10Maine,USA |
very nicely said.You have put into words what we all have felt at one point or another. |
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kauai Junior Member
since 2003-05-18
Posts 12 |
nakdthoughts - Truer words were never spoken [Typed] Midnitesun - Thanks, looking forward to reading some of your stuff. dani - we all feel like that sometime or another. ladypisces76 - That means more to me then you know. "This is the ish, yall ain't ready for" |
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