Open Poetry #26 |
Act I: The Romance Begins |
Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Act I: The Romance Begins I remember I was in rare form on that beautiful eve. The music told a love story that I could believe. My spirit was finally unleashed wild and free, When I happened on his brown eyes gazing at me. Introduced himself as Robert, added this isn’t my style, I, enticed by his eyes, stopped and chatted awhile. As I quietly commented on the song the band play, “Accompany me to the dance floor,” I heard him say. I shyly nodded my head, and he gently took my hand As we escaped in the music to some unchartered land. I felt myself melting away with him on that dance floor. As he looked into my eyes, I couldn’t dance anymore. Then his lips touched mine for the first time that night, And I felt my heart overflow with pure lover’s delight. With eve’s last dance, I so believed that he was right, As he whispered promises to be kept for another night. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Very sweet. Good job! Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very loving, i'm waiting for act 2, Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Patricia, this is a beautiful start of your romance story. I'm also waiting for ActII. Hugs, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
Patricia, WoW!!! I really liked this! Mike Oh happy poem!!! [This message has been edited by MikeFessel (05-19-2003 08:06 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Patricia |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Patricia: what a beautiful memory . . . one we all have shared at one time or another thank you for reminding me this is lovely xxoo |
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