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Patricia
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0 posted 2003-05-18 08:42 PM


Act I: The Romance Begins

I remember I was in rare form on
that beautiful eve.
The music told a love story that
I could believe.
My spirit was finally unleashed
wild and free,
When I happened on his brown eyes
gazing at me.
Introduced himself as Robert,
added this isn’t my style,
I, enticed by his eyes, stopped
and chatted awhile.
As I quietly commented on the
song the band play,
“Accompany me to the dance floor,”
I heard him say.
I shyly nodded my head,
and he gently took my hand
As we escaped in the music
to some unchartered land.
I felt myself melting away
with him on that dance floor.
As he looked into my eyes,
I couldn’t dance anymore.
Then his lips touched mine for
the first time that night,
And I felt my heart overflow
with pure lover’s delight.
With eve’s last dance,
I so believed that he was right,
As he whispered promises to be
kept for another night.


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1 posted 2003-05-18 09:44 PM


Very sweet.
Good job!

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JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-05-19 03:56 AM


Enjoyed...James
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3 posted 2003-05-19 04:05 AM


very loving, i'm waiting for act 2,

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4 posted 2003-05-19 04:20 AM


Patricia, this is a beautiful start of your romance story.
I'm also waiting for ActII.
Hugs,
Ethel

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MikeFessel
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6 posted 2003-05-19 07:50 AM


Patricia,
WoW!!! I really liked this!

    Mike    

Oh happy poem!!!


[This message has been edited by MikeFessel (05-19-2003 08:06 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-05-19 07:56 AM


Patricia


littlewing
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8 posted 2003-05-19 09:18 AM


Patricia:

what a beautiful memory . . .
one we all have shared at one time or
another
thank you for reminding me
this is lovely
xxoo

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