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aran
Junior Member

since 2003-05-18

Posts 34

0 posted 2003-05-18 12:30 PM

Drop on me
the bomb of faith.

How heavy!
Its tonnage will explode.

My eyes will quiver in concert with my lips
as my reasoning behind life implodes.

Seas vast and rivers wide
will fall, and fall at will
to the undominable will of One?

To destroy darkness:
secrate the desecrated.
Rebuild. Relearn. Renew.

Unknown to me, this is a normal occurance;
unknown to God, i am not.

[This message has been edited by aran (05-18-2003 12:31 PM).]

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2003-05-18 12:33 PM

Nice entree, aran - Welcome to Passions in Poetry - This is a wonderful place - You'll find a comfy niche here for sure.

Check your email for a special greeting...

aran
Junior Member

since 2003-05-18

Posts 34

2 posted 2003-05-18 12:38 PM

thanks, Nan. I really appreciate it

It is very nice to have features like that and nice people to use them. It makes me feel comfortable here. I find that the more comfortable i am, the more i'll contribute

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Darcy
New Member

since 2003-05-18

Posts 7

3 posted 2003-05-18 12:44 PM

"Drop on me
the bomb of faith.

How heavy!
Its tonnage will explode."

Excellent verse, my friend! The imagery in your poem is very good indeed.Liked it a lot.

A2J
Junior Member

since 2002-11-22

Posts 43
South Africa

4 posted 2003-05-18 12:47 PM

enjoyed

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-05-18 01:01 PM

very nice write...Welcome to Passions!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-05-18 01:31 PM

(smiles) Yes, no one is unknown to Him, we are all encircled by His grace and He may not drop the bomb but He will give you all you desire with the light alone! God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a wonderful debut! Welcome to Passions, sweet Aran, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your fabulous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aran, thank you for sharing!