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Into The Quiet ... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Into The Quiet … ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~*~ Into the quiet … that place inside her where dwells the woman you’ll never see~ She breathes so very quietly the woman, within the woman…soft serenity~ No one cometh that she doesn’t allow They cannot reach her here … She guards her thoughts so secretly That no one … ………………………no one …………………………can reach her now~ And when she is replenished … she will come again into your realm Until then … ………………………make not a sound~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (04-21-2003 01:50 PM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Marge, This is beautiful and soul satisfying to me, today..exactly what I needed to read and remember. Thank you for this. Enjoyed greatly, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful. We need the stillness and hope that others may understand. Love, Margherita |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...I am familiar with this place.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful...very serene Marge.. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge another beautiful gem from your hand. thank you for sharing dear lady (((hugs)) Charisma |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I loved this one! Excellent. Eric |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful write but I could barely read the words can't you use a bigger font? lol sorry just kidding you..loved this |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Marge, Yes, how true. I need a few minutes of quiet each day just to center myself. No one knows what I harbour inside. Very nice write. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
I love this. It says a lot. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Like I said, one of the most moving pieces of poetry I've seen with your name on it, and that's saying something. The subtle introspection here is art itself, and the art of self. Thanks for sharing. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Refreshing! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Very soothing to read. We all need times of solitude and quiet! Betty Lou Hebert |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
A delightful piece of serene writing. |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Hi margey Very tranquill poem, refreshing to be reading you again, thank you |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This deserves a definite  Regards to you Marge, Sudhir |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Marge: this is amazing - sounds like me touched me deeply it did and should breathe in print xxoo |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
It seems i've read this one slightly differently to everyone else. Still that's ok, enjoyed! And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
A woman needs that quiet at times, to replenish, and recover self. There's also another note I'm detecting here, of a woman who has a side that is hidden, that no one knows of, or can reach...what a wonderful versatile write, with many facets to think on! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This breathes peacefulness and the strength of knowing and accepting one's self... so very beautiful! *S* Knowing how much you hear makes the quiet even more a source of renewal. *S* But... you have to know I'm wondering how you ever escape those myriad muses long enough to find total quiet. *bratty grin* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, to say I loved your piece would be an understatement. Look what the music of you made me do. in this place that's unexplored dragons dream, to her soul moored and if you do not make a sound you will find her dreams abound she softly dwells in this repose and finds new grace in thorny rose yet dragon breath both out and in leaves a place of calm within and as she dreams she inward turns to find the truth for which she yearns go softly now - do not disturb her dreams soar high on wings of birds till soon refreshed the dreaming done she turns once more to face the sun. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
peaceful,warm and somehow reassuring. thats what i got from this and i think its brilliant. june x |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A quiet place many of us are familiar with...you write of it perfectly... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all. Differing interpretations, in my opinion, is exactly what this poetess hopes for~ EagleOne~ You may be more 'right' than you know~  Again .... thanks to each of you for allowing me to share word-thoughts with you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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