Open Poetry #26 |
Unnatural Enemy |
SparkleeLipGloss Junior Member
since 2003-05-18
Posts 19Arizona, USA |
My Unnatural enemy It cannot harm me But I am helpless against it It envies my happiness But enjoys my pain My unnatural enemy The cause for my demise It hungers for my pain It wants to ruin who I am I cannot stop it But you see, My unnatural enemy is no stranger The enemy I hate is all too familiar My unnatural enemy is my soul… The enemy is me… *3-12-03* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this aches... Welcome to Passions |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) This is true on a universal scale, sweet friend, we are always our worst enemy apparently, and all the while our best friend, how contradictive is that? This is a powerful debut, sweet friend, now look ahead and remain steadfast and trample the shadow, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet Katie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Katie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Be brave and fight it. Enemies can be conformed into friends with a little time. Welcome to passions. Julie |
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SparkleeLipGloss Junior Member
since 2003-05-18
Posts 19Arizona, USA |
Thank you guys for the welcomes! (((HUGS))) |
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TwoHeartsOnePen Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 60state of determination |
Welcome to Passions. Love is patient, indeed. It endures the distance when it seems we cannot endure it ourselves. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
yes welcome good to have you here |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
We are indeed our own worst enemies at times - You've said this well, Sparklee - I enjoyed... Welcome to Passions in Poetry - This is a wonderful place where you can settle in, share your work, and enjoy reading and responding to others. I look forward to reading more of your posts... Check your email for a special greeting... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Katie. Looking forward to more of your writings! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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SparkleeLipGloss Junior Member
since 2003-05-18
Posts 19Arizona, USA |
THank you guys so much! And thank you Nan for the greeting card (((HUGS))) |
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