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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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 . . . If I had to do it All over again Would I ? Let you reel me in With your smile Allow you to tempt me With your charms Believe your excuses And tall tales Wait patiently for Your phone call Eagerly for your return Become strong for you To lean on To depend on If I had to do it All over again Would I ? Yes. . . Chris Barker ~2002~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
don't you know it...me too |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
lol. Thanks passingshadows!!  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This, a beautiful poem about love. I really like this. Hugs Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Chris, Yep...I sure would!!!! LOL Heart Hugs,  Ethel |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
this just tells it all!! very loving It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Chris, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your beautiful words do! (kiss on cheek) I long to even feel this feeling for the first time, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I sometimes wonder...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah, an open mind and heart. Very nice questions and thoughtful writing. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is so much joy in knowing how far love can take us and the extent that lies in our certainty~ when we just know, without a doubt..Yes!!! This was such a nice poem Chris~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yeah, I know Chris...I know you would.. and so would I! I love this...he's a lucky man! See ya soon,  Love and hugs, Teed.~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah...you're back! And you brought your muse with you!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Born of love...a commitment... A vow perhaps? Nicely done, Chris. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Well, you had me on the edge of my seat...Would she or won't she??? She would do it all over again. That's great! I like this one...I like not knowing the ending until I get there. Unpredictability is very cool! -Patricia |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Yes, again and again. SG |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 I love reading your comments You are all wonderful !! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Nightshade - Geez, I've tried to call but don't have the number, hehehe... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bill - excuses, excuses....lol. Thankyou kindly for your response. "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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